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Prepositions in Formal Writing: Precision and Register

What this session covers

In formal written English, preposition choice is one of the clearest markers of register. Certain prepositions are preferred in formal prose, others avoided. Fixed formal prepositional phrases — with regard to, in terms of, in relation to, as a result of, on the basis of — are formulaic expressions that appear consistently in professional and academic writing. Knowing when to use upon instead of on, of instead of from for origin, and how to deploy formal prepositional phrases fluently will significantly improve the quality of written professional communication.

Personal Reflection

Before you start — think honestly about your own teaching and experience.

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Think about the formal documents you write — school reports, letters to parents, professional communications. Do you use fixed formal prepositional phrases like with regard to or in terms of, or do you tend to avoid them because you are unsure how to use them correctly?
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Which of these uses of prepositions in formal writing do you find most challenging: knowing when of is preferred to from for origin, choosing between on and upon, or using formal prepositional phrases without making them sound unnatural?

Discover the Pattern

Look at the examples. Answer each question before reading the explanation — this is how your students will learn too.

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Informal: She comes from a teaching family.
Formal: She is of a family with strong educational values.

Informal: The data comes from three different schools.
Formal: The data was drawn from three different schools. OR: The data are from three different schools.

In formal academic and professional writing, of is sometimes used where from might appear in informal speech to show origin or composition. Can you see the pattern?

In formal writing, of frequently expresses origin, composition, or membership in ways that from does not. A person of great experience (origin/characteristic) is more formal than a person from a background of great experience. A committee of senior teachers (composed of) is more formal than a committee made up of senior teachers. Of in these formal uses carries a sense of inherent quality or membership — the person or thing belongs to a category or is characterised by something. This formal of for origin and composition appears in descriptions, titles, and academic contexts: a question of timing, a matter of principle, a teacher of great ability. These are fixed or semi-fixed phrases where of is the expected formal preposition.

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Informal: The decision was based on the results.
Formal: The decision was made on the basis of the results.
Formal: The recommendation was arrived at based upon the available evidence.

In formal and legal writing, upon sometimes appears where on would be used in informal English. What does upon add? When is it preferred?

Upon is the more formal and literary equivalent of on. In everyday speech, on is always natural and upon can sound stiff or old-fashioned. In formal writing — legal documents, official letters, academic texts, formal reports — upon is used in specific fixed expressions to add formality and authority: upon reflection, upon consideration, upon arrival, upon completion, based upon. Upon tends to appear in formal phrases where on would also be grammatically correct but would sound less weighty. In professional contexts, teachers do not need to replace all instances of on with upon — but knowing the expressions where upon is expected (upon arrival, upon request, upon completion of the task) helps produce appropriately formal language.

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With regard to the inspection results, the school has made significant progress.
In terms of student attendance, there has been a marked improvement.
In relation to the previous year, outcomes have improved across all subjects.
As a result of the new timetable, teachers now have more preparation time.
On the basis of the evidence presented, the committee recommends continued support.

Look at these formal prepositional phrases. What does each one do — how does it begin the sentence or connect ideas? Could you replace each one with a simpler expression?

Each of these formal prepositional phrases introduces a topic, establishes a comparison, states a cause, or provides a basis for a claim. With regard to introduces the topic being addressed (concerning). In terms of focuses on a specific dimension of a topic. In relation to establishes a comparison or connection. As a result of states a cause (because of). On the basis of provides the evidence or reason for a conclusion. All of these can be replaced by simpler language — about, because of, compared to — but in formal writing, these phrases signal professional register and add precision. They are not mere decoration: each one has a specific function and is appropriate in specific contexts. Learning to use them correctly improves the formality and clarity of professional documents.'

The Pattern — What You Just Discovered

In formal writing, preposition choice signals register. Of is used for composition, origin, and inherent quality. Upon appears in formal fixed expressions where on is too informal. Key formal prepositional phrases — with regard to, in terms of, in relation to, as a result of, on the basis of — introduce topics, comparisons, causes, and evidential grounds in professional and academic prose.
FormUse / MeaningExample
Formal phrase Informal equivalent Example in formal writing
with regard to about / concerning With regard to the inspection, the school is fully prepared.
in terms of regarding / when it comes to In terms of attendance, results have improved significantly.
in relation to compared to / in connection with In relation to the previous year, progress has been substantial.
as a result of because of / due to As a result of the new policy, punctuality has improved.
on the basis of based on / because of On the basis of the data, the committee recommends further training.
in respect of regarding / about In respect of this matter, a formal response will be issued.
upon + noun on / when Upon arrival, please sign the visitor register. Upon completion of the form...
Special Rule / Notes

DUE TO VERSUS AS A RESULT OF VERSUS OWING TO
These three expressions all indicate cause, but they have different registers and grammatical behaviours. Due to is adjectival and should follow a form of be: The delay was due to a power cut. In informal usage, due to is widely used as a preposition (Due to the rain, the lesson was cancelled), though this is disputed in formal style guides. As a result of is a full prepositional phrase and can begin a sentence or appear mid-sentence: As a result of the training, teachers are more confident. Owing to is formal and functions as a preposition: Owing to an increase in enrolment, additional classrooms are required. In formal professional writing, as a result of and owing to are safer choices than due to at the start of a sentence.

IN RESPECT OF VERSUS WITH RESPECT TO
Both phrases mean concerning or about and both are formal. In respect of tends to appear in legal and official British English: In respect of this matter, the school has fulfilled its obligations. With respect to is slightly more common in academic writing: With respect to the findings, several recommendations can be made. Both are correct in formal contexts, but in respect of tends to sound more formal or legalistic.

OMITTED PREPOSITIONS IN FORMAL WRITING
One subtle feature of formal writing is that prepositions are sometimes added where informal speech might omit them — and sometimes omitted where informal speech might include them. For example, formal English says on a daily basis rather than daily, in a formal manner rather than formally, at the highest level rather than at the top. These elaborated prepositional phrases signal formality and deliberateness.

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FORMAL PREPOSITION CHECK - Introducing a topic formally? → With regard to (not with regards to). - Focusing on a specific dimension? → In terms of. - Establishing a comparison or connection? → In relation to. - Stating a cause or consequence? → As a result of / owing to. - Providing evidence or grounds? → On the basis of. - Using upon — is it a fixed formal expression? → Check: upon arrival, upon completion, upon reflection, based upon. Not simply replacing every on with upon. - Is of expressing composition or inherent quality? → This is formal and correct: a teacher of great experience, a matter of principle.

Common Student Errors

With regards to the inspection results, the school is pleased.
With regard to the inspection results, the school is pleased.
WhyThe fixed formal phrase is with regard to — singular, no s. With regards to is a very common error even among experienced writers.
The decision was made in terms of the available budget. | BETTER: The decision was made on the basis of the available budget. | WHY: In terms of focuses on a dimension or aspect. On the basis of provides evidential grounds for a decision. For a decision, on the basis of is more precise.
WhyIn terms of focuses on a dimension or aspect. On the basis of provides evidential grounds for a decision. For a decision, on the basis of is more precise.
She is a teacher with great experience. (in a formal report) | BETTER: She is a teacher of great experience. | WHY: Of is the formal preposition for expressing inherent quality or characterisation. With great experience is not wrong, but of great experience is more formal and conventional in reports.
WhyOf is the formal preposition for expressing inherent quality or characterisation. With great experience is not wrong, but of great experience is more formal and conventional in reports.
Upon the decision was made, the school informed all parents.
Once the decision was made, the school informed all parents. OR: Upon making the decision, the school informed all parents.
WhyUpon + noun or upon + -ing form are the correct structures. Upon the decision was made incorrectly treats upon as a conjunction — it is a preposition.
Due to we had limited resources, the training was shorter than planned.
Due to limited resources, the training was shorter than planned. OR: As we had limited resources, the training was shorter than planned.
WhyDue to is a preposition — it is followed by a noun phrase, not a clause. For a clause, use as, because, or since.

Check Your Understanding — Part 1

Choose the most appropriate formal prepositional phrase or preposition to complete each sentence.

______ the new timetable, teachers now have thirty more minutes for lesson preparation each week.___________
______ the inspection, the school is confident it meets all required standards.___________
______ arrival, all visitors must sign the register at the school office.___________
She is a teacher ______ fifteen years of experience in rural schools.___________
______ the evidence gathered, the committee recommends that the school receive additional funding.___________
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Check Your Understanding — Part 2: Why Is It Wrong?

Each sentence contains a preposition or prepositional phrase error inappropriate for formal writing. Write the correct version and explain the improvement.

With regards to the concerns raised by parents, the school will hold a meeting next week.
Write the correct sentence:
Explain why it is wrong:
With regard to the concerns raised by parents, the school will hold a meeting next week.
The fixed formal phrase is with regard to — singular, no s. With regards to is a very common error. Remove the s.
Due to we did not have enough textbooks, some students shared materials.
Write the correct sentence:
Explain why it is wrong:
Due to a shortage of textbooks, some students shared materials. OR: As we did not have enough textbooks, some students shared materials.
Due to is a preposition — it must be followed by a noun phrase, not a clause. Replace with a noun phrase (a shortage of textbooks) or use a conjunction (as/because) for a clause.
In terms of the decision, we recommend proceeding with the original plan.
Write the correct sentence:
Explain why it is wrong:
On the basis of the evidence, we recommend proceeding with the original plan. OR: With regard to this decision, we recommend the original plan.
In terms of focuses on a dimension or aspect — it is not appropriate for introducing a recommendation or grounds for a decision. On the basis of (evidence) or with regard to (topic) are more precise here.
She is a teacher with considerable ability and a long record of excellent results.
Write the correct sentence:
Explain why it is wrong:
She is a teacher of considerable ability with a long record of excellent results.
Of considerable ability is the formal construction for inherent quality in descriptive formal writing — more formal than with. Both are grammatically correct but of is conventional in formal professional descriptions.

Classroom Teaching Sequence

Use this sequence directly in class — guided discovery, no textbook needed. Tap each step to mark it done.

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STEP 1 — FORMAL PHRASES IN REAL DOCUMENTS (8 minutes): Bring examples of formal prepositional phrases from real documents — school reports, inspection summaries, or official letters. Ask learners to identify the formal prepositional phrases they can see. Write them on the board. Ask: what would you say in everyday speech instead of each one? Establish that these phrases are markers of formal register.

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STEP 2 — WITH REGARD TO (NO S) (5 minutes): Address the with regard to error directly. Write both versions on the board (with regard to / with regards to). Confirm: the formal phrase has no s. Ask learners to produce two sentences using with regard to correctly in school or professional contexts.

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STEP 3 — UPON IN FIXED EXPRESSIONS (7 minutes): Introduce the key upon expressions: upon arrival, upon completion, upon reflection, upon request, based upon. Confirm that upon is not simply a replacement for all instances of on — it appears in specific formal fixed expressions. Ask learners to produce two sentences using upon expressions from the list.

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STEP 4 — FORMAL PHRASE MATCHING (8 minutes): Write the formal phrases on one side and their informal equivalents on the other, in random order. Ask learners to match them: with regard to (about), in terms of (regarding), in relation to (compared to), as a result of (because of), on the basis of (based on). Then ask learners to produce one sentence using each formal phrase.

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STEP 5 — FORMAL LETTER EDITING (12 minutes): Give learners a short letter written in neutral or informal register. Ask them to improve it by replacing informal prepositions and phrases with more formal ones. Share and compare. Give specific feedback on which improvements are genuine register improvements and which changes are unnecessary.

Ready-to-Use Classroom Materials

Use directly in class — copy, adapt, or read aloud. No printing needed.

1 Formal or Informal? Register Matching
Write formal prepositional phrases on one side of the board and their informal equivalents on the other. Ask learners to match them and then use each formal phrase in a sentence relevant to school or professional life.
Example sentences
with regard to → about / concerning
in terms of → when it comes to / regarding
in relation to → compared to / in connection with
as a result of → because of / due to
on the basis of → based on
upon completion → when completed / after completing
in respect of → regarding / about
2 Report Sentence Building
Give learners a topic (student attendance, inspection results, resource allocation) and ask them to write three formal sentences using different formal prepositional phrases. They must use at least three different phrases from the lesson. Share and discuss register appropriateness.
Example sentences
With regard to student attendance this term, there has been a notable improvement.
In terms of overall outcomes, the school has exceeded its targets in four out of five subject areas.
As a result of the new homework policy, parental engagement has increased significantly.
On the basis of the data collected, the school recommends targeted support for Class 3.
3 Formal Letter Improvement
Write a short professional letter using informal prepositions and simple language. Ask learners to improve it by replacing informal choices with formal prepositional phrases where appropriate. Discuss which changes improve register and which are unnecessary.
Example sentences
Original (informal): About the complaint from the parent, we have looked into it and because of what we found, we are changing the way things are done.
Improved (formal): With regard to the concern raised by the parent, the school has conducted a thorough review. As a result of this review, a revised procedure will be implemented with immediate effect.

Plan Your Next Steps

For each strategy, choose the option that best describes where you are now.

Collect examples of formal prepositional phrases from real professional documents you receive — inspection reports, government circulars, formal letters — and build a personal reference list.
Learn the most important fixed formal phrases as complete units: with regard to (no s), in terms of, on the basis of, as a result of, upon completion. These are immediately useful in professional writing.
Practise writing opening sentences of formal reports and letters using these phrases — the opening sentence sets the register for the whole document.
Address the with regards to error in your own writing and in learner writing immediately — it is one of the most visible formal writing errors and is easy to correct once identified.
Remember that upon is not a universal replacement for on — use it only in the fixed formal expressions where it is expected, not throughout formal documents.
What is the one change you will make next time you teach this grammar point?

Key Takeaways

1 In formal writing, of expresses composition, origin, and inherent quality: a teacher of great experience, a matter of principle.
2 Upon appears in specific formal fixed expressions — upon arrival, upon completion, upon reflection, based upon — not as a general replacement for on.
3 With regard to (no s) is the fixed formal phrase for introducing a topic. With regards to (with s) is an error.
4 Key formal prepositional phrases and their functions: with regard to (topic), in terms of (dimension), in relation to (comparison), as a result of (cause), on the basis of (evidence).
5 Due to must be followed by a noun phrase, not a clause — for a clause, use as, because, or since.